菩薩蠻.木棉花

Posted: July 30, 2015 in Uncategorized

雲開烈日枝間照,
棉花弄影驚枝鳥。
終日伴雞窗,
年年聽序庠。
夏來飛絮嘉,
片片谷風嫁。
縱有疾蟲侵,
明年又成蔭。

平仄力求完善,惟尚有未周處,還望指教。

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